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Post by Sinclair on Apr 10, 2006 0:59:46 GMT
Chapter 1
“Sir, we’re getting a transmission over the communication relay, want me to send it trough?
“Yes, on screen”
Over communication relay: ”This is the freighter Acolypse: A-03, we are under attack by hostile forces. Request help from anybody near sector 6-C; I repeat sector 6-C”
“This is Commander Sinclair of the Babylon 5 station, what’s your situation?”
“We where carrying passengers to Minbari home world, when raiders showed up. Most of our escort is destroyed; the rest is trying to hold the raiders back until we can make it to a jumpgate.”
“We will dispatch a wing immediately to help you, hold out until wee can get there”
“Confirmed commander”
“LT. Ivonova, launch delta Wing”
“Delta Wing launched commander”
“Delta leader, your mission is to find the transport and escort it back. I repeat, find it and escort it back, do not engage the enemy! Do you confirm Delta leader?”
“Confirmed commander”
Sinclair keeps an eye out for the wing while they’re entering the jumpgate and disappear.
“We’re entered the last sector for the transport, enable all sensors at maximum, Delta 3 and 4 stay at the jumpgate in case the raiders tries to run”
“Confirmed delta leader”
“Sir, I’m picking up energy readings. Definitely weapons sir.”
“I read it to, let’s engage and rescue that transport”
To be continued…
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Post by Sinclair on Apr 10, 2006 1:00:12 GMT
Now, what ye think??
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RequinBeta4
Dark Jedi
ex-Master
Any fool may attack and die. Not all can prepare, counterattack, and eradicate.
Posts: 125
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Post by RequinBeta4 on Apr 10, 2006 1:29:07 GMT
Too little of a portion to tell, but very good from what i can see (grammer, ect)
I used to do FL fanfictions myself 2 years ago, if people want i can post them..
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Rebel
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Post by Rebel on Apr 10, 2006 3:20:30 GMT
i enjoy reading it go ahead n post requien
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